Narrative writing

Room 1 came up with our own success criteria for a great narrative. Our theme for the story was

A STORY OF SURVIVAL 

 

We then went away and used the success criteria to help us write an awesome narrative

Here are some snips from our writing. 

The scare of the banana- By Tiana (Year 5 )

As long years passed the banana grew and became dull and boring. The bananas human friend suggested going to a maze or to space but the banana said “all I could hear was you telling me I was going to be squished or explode”.

A story of survival- By Jobi (Year 6)

I knelt down to bless the weird looking Taiaha but when I picked it up it let out a huge bang! “Hey!” cried one of the soldiers. “I don’t know if you know but I’m allergic to death, especially around the face.”

A story of survival- By Sam (Year 6)

Suddenly the water was just above their heads and they could not leave but managed to go up every once in a while. Then they managed to get out of the cage but noticed they were lost at sea. 

A story of survival- By Cheyanne (Year 5)

When we got halfway we were hit by something, Zap! I turned into a monster squid and eftpos turned into a flaming bird but Amber, we couldnt understand her because she was speaking Japanese.